Comments : Her Majesty

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sam
    What a gem you have written. The word choices and imagery is fantastic.

    Billowing winds blow
    In a place I once froze
    Where a thorn will grow
    Upon a crystal rose

    I love this stanza. It is so beautiful.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Aaron Deevers

    Amazing job this was a beautiful poem you written here.

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Beautiful and graceful...love the imagery and word choices...well done on the challenge!

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    A pale face voyage
    Of enticing beauty
    Jaded in image
    Within her majesty

    Hey Sam,

    you really took me to some nice places with this one, loved it friend.

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Hi Sam!

    Yes, your poems are always full of beautiful words. I'm sure her majesty will agree, lol!

    Love,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Wonderful word choice in this beautifully penned piece! The imagery is majestic! The flow is impeccable. Excellent job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    The end is fantastic. Small but so powerful poem. Great one!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Aww, This is amazing, SAm! Love your writing!

    ^_^ 5/5