It's good but I don't know, the flow is a little wierd..Just my opinion. I like it though. Good work :)

I agree with the above statement it is a really good poem but strange flow. But when has sorrow ever been normal? Really good keep up the great work.

Like i said, before , if you want a good flow and good peom , you msut give the reader a light good way to understadn your feelings,

ina good way ,
i would my self advice you to follow my previous advices of the otyher poems , adn wrok hard to make rhymes and pargraphs and structure , good ,
you ahev some 2 lines some 10 lines, some 1 line ,

not good one ,
i hope you see what i mean !!
a fair one