Excellent write..

Lost in thinking of her unthinking
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Like a child at a grave's side
Dont understand whats going on
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Darkness covers up its hard face
But every darkness soon must cease
Because for me its forever morning
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Left to walk these shattered pavements
My heart this highway, this road, without you

ur choice and use of words and the comparisons are amazing... loved it..

This is an awesome poem who ever left u well... I can see how they hurt you keep going loving it....

Love this bit
Darkness covers up its hard face
But every darkness soon must cease
Because for me its forever morning

This is really good. I love the wording of it. Great write and keep it up. ^-^

This is pretty good =)

I love this. It leaves much room for the reader to fill! It shows a lot of character in itself. It deserved my 5! ;) keep up the good work.