Comments : Ullision love

  • 16 years ago

    by hopefulsmile

    Hi my friends ,
    the last part of this writing i just add it today coz i just know the hurting reality soo i was trying to write about my love and how much i miss him but it's needs just one night to change it to a sad sad poem :-(

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Aww dear, am so sorry for you, this poem shows alot of pain. i was touched by this. you have a great talent to show your feelings.

    loved the whole poem but liked these two more
    "always keep in your mind
    that i'm someone who hardly to find"