Comments : Oblivious

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Little Lie

    Good poem.
    And good use of imagery.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Oh I just loved this .. it was so beautiful and sweet. The words you choice to described the imagery was flawless because I could vision everything clearly in my mind. Great job at desribing the detail .. it was a wonderful poem to read. Well done *5/5*