Comments : FutureBeaten

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    "You're future-beaten into grim submission
    By your own youthful stance on sedition."

    I really like your closing lines, nicely done. I enjoyed this piece and agree with so much of it.

    "We are judged.
    So we judge."

    We live what we know and pass it along to each generation.

    Nice work.