This poem's deep. i think that's cool. i wish i could write stuff like this. but i don't have enough talent. good job.

I was just browsing through poems and listening to music and I came across this poem while listening to "The Freshman" by Verve Pipe. It was amazing to listen to it and read your poem at the same time, I don't know how to describe it, they just intensified each other...anyways 5/5!