I love that one it has so much emotion......

Soo good! wow, this is prolly like one my faves.

Wow this poem is really good.=D

This is great work. ♥

She is the girl who nobody knows
Because her real self never shows

^^

this is my life story !...hehe...i love it ...beautifully written ...deep yet simple...awesome work !

I like this poem alot..its tru and alot of girls may feel like that most of the times...great job. Keep it up

I really liked this poem it explains alot and feels like you went through this yourself.

It relates to many things and feelings no-one should feel, although many teenagers go through... Me for one.

Good job;)
Keep it up honey.

Lovee.Kelseaa
xo

"She is the girl whose life turned upside down
And in all this pain she will silently drown"
Personallly my fave stanza.

It was a reallly simple and well written piece.
You have expressed yourself so well

great job
xxx