Awwww, thats great writing keep it up x

Sounds like u got hurt
poor thing
we have all been there
x

Andy,

this is amazing. I love how you have painted the perfect pictured romance, all tender and encompassing. The order seen through to its 2nd and 3rd bitter and sad conclusions.

I love how you can draw the reader in with your imagery.

Well done 5/5

Michael