It would be much pleasing to read if you try to edit the texts like this "Iâ??m".. i h\find it simple yet powerful and that emotions caught y whole interest.. good job by the way i love the last line it shows that you are now ready to face whatever circumstances that will come your way. =)

". . . little girl no more," << Honestly, I think " any more" would sound better, and it's what should be there anyway. But, sometimes "no more" sounds better, lol, just not in this case.

You did a great job with this poem, I absolutely love it. Especially the end of it. (:

Now, do you mean " by watching you walk away" at the end, or is it correct how it is?

And, I'm glad you've gotten stronger. It just stinks on how it came to be, eh.

Keep it up, darling. You're a good writer.

There are a few little problem with in the poem. you should read through it again and it's a little short it would be nice if you could try to make it longer..great poem though i liked it. 5/5

Brilliant.
It seems a lot of people seem to think others can't change, and usually gets people bothered; that seems to be conveyed in the poem.

Although it's been said, you got those "I���¢??m" that always seems to appear when you use a ' in your poem.
Something about this site I guess.