Comments : Elements of Love

  • 16 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    I could hear you reciting this to me
    as I read it. It made it much more personal,
    you know? Ahh. It was nice. =)

    I'd never think up this idea,
    it's so wonderful. So good.

    "The vines which entangle our hearts,
    Flow deep into the soil below,
    Foundations forever strong,
    Our love will always grow."

    ^That's^ my favorite stanza by you.
    Evereverever. It flows so beautifully,
    and the imagery's magnificent.
    I can almost see it in my mind.
    It feels like there's so much heart,
    so many emotions poured into those lines;
    you mean those words so honestly.
    It's good, Ben, real good. =)

  • 15 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    Ben, I do love you so much. This piece is so, so gorgeous. I couldn't resist commenting again! =p Really, love. This one pulls at the heartstrings! Nearly brings tears to my eyes. It just feels so sincere as you're reading.. you know? You can feel the emotions and the authenticity/sincerity. Ah, jeeze. You are so amazing. Ilylaphlp. Always and forever. ;p