A very beautiful poem, carried on wings of Angels to the Most High, Yeshua.
Peace and Blessings

A sweet and touching poem i love the style of it and i love the poem cause i love god and i haven't read a poem yet a about god great job..5/5

I enjoyed your poem, just one question.
Was this made to be a song?
If not it could be use as one I think.
great write. 5/5

Ultimate Love – this title really grabbed me. It is simple, but powerful… it begs you to read on so you can find out what the Ultimate Love is.

I love reading poems about my God and everything that makes Him Who He is. Sher, you have such a beautiful way of relating your love and devotion to Him with your words.

I’m sure you’ve probably prayed these words numerous times, and that’s exactly what this reads like – a prayer. It also would lend itself very well to being a worship song.

The only “errors” I can see are the words that refer to God (you, your, king, lamb). I usually capitalize those, but that’s up to you…

The only thing I might change is the repeated stanza. Consider repeating it after every other stanza or not until the very end.

This was such a powerful poem! You clearly have a wonderful relationship with our God and your love for Him really shines in these words.

Its good!

It's very strong poem. A poem of passion and faith towards Christ. It's very soothing.

Marvelllous

OMGG i love it!! so amazing!!!

Amazing poem! i love it!

I like your poem well done sherry it is a poem of faith something that alot of sefish teenagers need to be taught. your poem gives me hope for the human race thanks for your contribution to poetry God bless.

Oh so soothing, so spiritual....!!! I always love poem depicting love for god, the almighty as they are indeed everything!!! And to surrender yourself in his service is just the ultimate love!!!:)

I come before you Lord
Kneeling at your feet
There's power in your name
Jesus, the King of kings

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A beautiful start..!! Quite a devotional aura created here....

Though my flesh is forever weak
My spirit grows strong in you
Giving you all I have
Finding glory in your name

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This ones the most powerful stanza and my favorite:) I really have no words to explain the passion instilles in this part!

I am a child of yours
Clinging to your every word
Surrendering all I am
To Jesus, the Lamb of lambs

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Hmm.... God just needs faithful disciples and this one depicts it very well....

How great is your love
Father, Spirit, and Son
To forgive all I have ever done
Without hesitation; never counting the cost

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Indeed lord never wants a pay in return of his love, his rewards he bestows on us but just a loyal remembrance and worship... I liked the way you described the lord...

I come before you Lord
Kneeling at your feet
There's power in your name
Jesus, the King of kings

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Repetition of the first stanza revives the strength of this write:)

Great Sherry as always....(: