I love this keep up the great work

Yes I too worry about what people say about me, I too struggle to become more social. Something I don't think I can ever change, so learning to live with my pain has become just another daily task.

Many people can relate this poem. Everything is fine with the poem... but I think you can structure it in a better way... just my personal opinion.

Breaking into pieces no longer able to hide the sorrow
Confused yesterday, in pain today, what of tomorrow?

Its a nice poem , it speaks about people !

Lovely
5/5
biya

Great poem
opening up is hard, but people werent meant to be alone, were meant to love and be loved
this poem had a good flow :]