Comments : Take My Pain Away

  • 13 years ago

    by Boy

    Show me that deep love,
    which I so badly need.
    Show me how to trust,
    another without greed

    my favourite stanzaaa. it realy relates to my love sotry. great poem i do respect of your poetry

  • 13 years ago

    by BurriedFaceDown

    Short, Simple, yet Powerful

  • 13 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    I agree with SheDevil. :) It is powerful. I enjoyed reading it. 5/5