Comments : The Beginning

  • 13 years ago

    by JEFF

    I had to add this to my favorites, this is one well writen poem. You keep me wanting to read more. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Lemma

    Wow, what a hot poem! Fantabulously sensual and sexy without being too forward and blunt. Flow was spot on and the rhyme was perfecto. My favourite stanza was:

    "When you kiss me all else fades,
    Your lips are all I know,
    All I need or all I want,
    Emotions overflow."

    I love the way you carried the second line over to the third.


    Em xXx