Comments : I was so blind

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    I love this poem! written very well, keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Viola

    Thanks for the comment. That was fast! =]

    Getting to your poem, I loved it. Everything was described so well. Like looking at the photograh of the person..trying to see something that you missed while that person was alive, but realising that it will not change anything anyways because they are gone now. This poem is very sad. But you have to know it's not your fault, even though it feels like it is. I think the person got what they wanted, which was to die. So in a way you should be happy for him/her and just try to live your life for the both of you now. Stay strong! =]
    --Viola

  • 16 years ago

    by JAZMIN

    WOW!! This was a great poem!! Great job...

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaded Serenity

    I can tell that you put your soul into this poem. I can see the pain through its lines. that was so heartfelt, great job.