Nice very emotional and awsome job. Though it might be better if they were longer:) but good job just the same.

Another sad poem. Wow, this is just simple but amazingly great. Another 5/5 for you!!! Keep writing!!!

This was really good. I thought it was very deep. However I also think this poem could be amazing, if you lengethened it...

Still good though,
5/5 --Elly.

Excellent I just wish there was more to it and a little bit more description

It was short, but it held more than the previous poem I had commented did. I quite liked it.

I'm in so much despair.
`I feel you should edit that line. It was too short compared to the others -- again, syllabication -- and broke the flow .

The last couple of lines, were (very) similar to the lines in the other poems I read, and that kind of made me frown. But it was good .

--..MiNDYY