It was nice. i think it could be better but i dont know what it is missing. just seemed a lil' off to me. but all in all it carried the message very well. great job

I really liked this poem. The flow was a little off. Maybe try rhyming it will help with that. I loved the word choice and the emotion. I can really relate to this poem. keep up the great work :D 5/5

This is a very sweet poem, and many can relate to it. keep up the good work!

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I love this it makes me think of my angel my love...great job 5/5