Nicely written but last couple of lines could have been better. That's what i feel.

Thanks, i will try harder next time

Ya it is i write the poem 4 section and every time i write for the man i love amr so i write this message at the end

So powerful and full of emotions

excellent work

Wow.
Very Well Written.
I really enjoyed this. How you hinted that our dreams are someother place. Like your inlove with a guy in your dream, though he does not exist in reality. It was very unigue and I very much liked the read...
keep it up,
5/5 --Elly.

Pretty good, kind of cliche though.
Youshould try some more original lines, this poem wasn't really very unique. It is very sweet but it could have meen better
4/5

Hey, fairly well written poem, although personally i prefer alternate rhymes, following something along the lines of;
A
B
A
B
However this is still a well crafted poem. I would also suggest some more in depth feelings and descriptions to immerse the readers into the depths of the poem and your feelings,

Ben

" somewhere underneath the summer sun."

^^ I think it might be lacking a syllable or something? Unless you have it that way on purpose maybe tri " . . . the hot summer sun. . . "

"with your eyes so beautiful as can be..."

^^ maybe ". . . as beautiful as can be. . . "
It would sound better

Other than those few things with the first stanza you did an amazing job with this poem. I really liked it. I would suggest though, not so much of the " . . . " it just kind of looks weird, but there's nothing wrong with it, other than it not being what is suppose to be there, you know? I think you just used it too much.

But the poem was great darling, I wouldn't even think twice about rating it a 5/5. Even with the few mistakes there were. (:

Keep it up.

Thanks alot for you comment

Its very well written,.and full of emotions,5/5.^_^

I don't like this poem. I don't like typical love poetry and I must say that this isn't original at all, sorry, I don't want to offend you but I simply couldn't feel this poem.

I had a dream about you last night,
oh how everything seemed so right...
together we were having so much fun,
somewhere underneath the summer sun...
seeing your bright smile so clear to me,
with your eyes so beautiful as can be...
..................
the first stanza is my favourite stanza. its realy touchy lines. everyline shows full of love inside a person.
....................

Imagination running wild and free,
a magical dream so real to me...
to hold you close and feel your love,
was so tender and sweet from above...
I did not want to wake and have it end,
this dream I had of a dear friend...

*******
2nd stanza is quite deep. and the feelings that a person does not want to loose. or in other hand it shows the imagination of love and right afte this needs this in real life welldone in 2ns stanza
**********************

Is it wrong to feel this way,
about a dream that occurs every other day...
touching my soul playing with my mind,
happiness I'm searching for and hoping to find...
a dream I love it seems so real,
that each time I wake I do feel...

in 3rd stanza you realy change the complete part of your poem. maybe becoz you awaken from your dreams. and now you were in real life. in 3rd stanza
***************
The love in my heart a smile on my face,
because I've found true happiness some other place...
not complaining nor will I ever deny,
the feeling that's coming upon I...
for now it's just a dream to me,
in a far away world I do for see...
*****
in fourth stanza i didnt not understand the meaning behind it. maybe you only can tell me this meaning. so i wont say anything about fourth stanza

and the last two lines shows you aim and the destination towards your belovedone excellent work here.

and one more thing... your ryyming scehmmes was good. try to improve it more than you can..

i am giving you 4/5 cuz i didnt understand the fourth stanza. allthough this poem is excellent. i respect your this drean and the true love feelings

Okay alone as you dont get the meaning i will try to explain it to you:The love in my heart a smile on my face,
because I've found true happiness some other place...
not complaining nor will I ever deny,
the feeling that's coming upon I...
for now it's just a dream to me,
in a far away world I do for see...
as i have the feeling of love in my heart and i have a smile on my face that i find my happiness in my dreams and i cant complain the feeling i got after this dream its like a real love and i wish to see it one day .
i hope that you get it now

Wonderful poem very touching

a 5/5
and a tear or too

tears

This was really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great job!..i loved the true feelings that seem that come from your heart!
***aLy***

The love in my heart a smile on my face,

^ aww that line was just so beautiful just like the emotions and imagery throughout your whole piece. I could truly feel the love you felt when writing this piece. Well done *5/5*

Throughout the piece, the word "Cliche" kept coming to mind, although it wasn't quite original to me, it was quite good. A few typos here and there, and there are a few awkward lines. Work on your syllabication -- that seems to be the largest problem here (which isn't actually that large). Keep working at it.

--..MiNDYY

I dream about you amr before i saw you
what does that mean?

and when you write if you would put commas in it it would be a lot easier to read.

It mean that i love someone (amr) before i saw him,and i will put commas thanks for the point of view

As compared to the poems that i've read i think you can put more imaginations and ideas with this one..you can improve it more. nice flow and nice thought