*To say I love you is still not a strong enough meaning
If there was a word stronger then love that would be my feeling.*

*I cant imagine a life with out us together,
I cant imagine us being less then forever .*

wow, you have really good poems out there...you surprised me but no wonder because this is one of love's miracles

'If I had to live my life with out you ,
Crying all day and all night is what I would do .'

-This was an effective way to start of your piece.

'My love for you is the most precious thing on earth
Like our first kiss or our Childs birth . '

-This made me smile. It was so sweet, and filled with love.

"When people ask me to describe love, one word is all I do,
I think for a bit now smile and say the only word is you."

-This is something all girls would melt when they heard it. I know my boyfriend has said somethings like this, and it just makes you realize how much you truly love them.

Overall this piece was amazing. You really have a way with love poems. Excellent Write.

5.5--Elly.

Really nice job
the only thing is the flow was a little off for me
but otherwise this poem was nice

This poem is also also too good. I think you are excellent as far as love poems are concerned.overall you are good.

Thanks, love is great, amr is great
write is great.

What a lines,its so nice,..i really love it,^_^,.5/5.

When I look into your eyes I can feel the love that is to be ,
Your the air I breath the reason I live you are my destiny.
I wouldnt be able to live life with out you (AMR).

this poems is good.

My love for you is the most precious thing on earth
Like our first kiss or our Childs birth

i think you should have written "your love for me is more precious thing..." instead of my love. anyhow its our choice

sorry here 4/5 only

Wow, i could honestly see all the time and hard work you put into this and it really shows....great job!

Awe. that was very beautiful and very sweet. i can relate to this. i feel like this with a guy who use to be one of my best friends...but then i dunno what happened... anyway. i really like this piece. great write. 5/5

Thank you

Its simple but elegant,.i love it

A five out of five
even though i dont like the rhyming verymuch too close together it was a great poem

tears

It is hard for everyone to live without the one they love because they feel empty .. like a huge part of their heart and soul is missing. It is such a terrible emotion to experiance. Well done in expressing yourself in this piece. *5/5*

It starts out slightly awkward -- a little weak for my tastes.

My love for you is the most precious thing on earth
Like our first kiss or our Childs birth .
`Those were beautiful lines.

I want have kids and say I do .
`"to have kids" -- missing a word.

If there was a word stronger then love that would be my feeling.
`The "then" should be "than"

Your more beautiful then the reddest rose ,
`"You're"

Your the air I breath the reason I live you are my destiny.
`"You're" + "breathe"

So at times, the flow breaks -- but overall, I somewhat liked this poem. It's pretty good, but a bit rough + needs some work.

--..MiNDYY

Aww! This was such a cute poem! The punctuation wasn't perfect in some places, but besides that, it was a really sweet and pleasing to read poem.
4/5
~gabriella

Again Great poem. I loved it. Things that I have wanted to say to someone but I cant... Great Job...
Always
Emma 5/5

It is very well writen and full of emotion.
i can feel the love you feel for this person and the sadness would feel when/if you find they dont/didnte love you in return.

i give it a 5/5

Love this poem! Great job!

Deep meaning of LOVE trough ur lines !