Aww i really loved this keep up the great work

Wow that's deep lol i love it your so good at writing poems its so amazing =)

once again 5/5
keep up the good work =)<3

I love it.. the emotion behind it is amazing
There some great litarary devices here that blow me away. It coveys a very deep emotion in which people can relate to and what i love about it, is that it is very realistic very down to earth. its not all lovey-dovey its just real.
Great job-
=)