Oh wow. that's amazing!

You tenderly saunter backward and fall

^ this just seems so ironic to me...dunno why, it just does. like, mwahahaha. ;)

lol. well, great job.

Short as it might be, the language used made it a great piece. None of it really "rhymes" but every time I read it to myself it sounds like it's got a subtle sense of rhyme. That's some skilled writing right there. 5/5, easily.

Sarah,

You grow with every poem you make!
Very well done, such awesome choice of words!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

I agree with everyone else great job