Comments : Hey Baby , Lets Make Love Not War .

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Amazing. Blew me away. The titile caught my attention and I was eager to read more and oh boy am I glad I did. I loved your transition from describing the problems you face to how you should deal with them. The love behind your words was wonderful and inspiration ... just flawless. Your use of imagery here was what stuck out to me the most and is what completed the poem for me. You use of brackets are amazing. They make the poem so much for enjoyable to read and I just love when you put them because you know just when to use it and it is very effective in getting your message across. Well done *5/5*