Veryy well Haiku. Its has a very good imagery 5/5

I love Haikus. It was great, and what makes Haikus different is that they are so short, yet this one is very descriptive.. in the short length of the poem. I highly enjoyed it.

Greta xx

Oh wow...i really love haiku. because they can be so powerful when written correctly *haha, in other words, not by me*

this can be taken so many ways, this haiku. in a literal or a metaphorical way. either way, truly beautiful.

takes in , deaths meaning.

^ definitely a mind blowing last line. such a powerful finish...

great job...

Wow very good.. it so little words you wrote alot =D

Wow so short wonder... Nice poem, keep writing Noir

(Best wishz... 007)

Very short, but has a lot of meaning if one' looks closely. Nice short write Noir, although I would of liked to see some length to this poem.

Is this some kind of specific style or structure? If so I would suggest to put the style at the bottom so the readers know when they read it.

Overall a nice short and to the point poem. Good Job!!

Peace, Joe

Very short, brilliant

Very well written poem. short and so meaningful. well done!