Incredible! I could feel your true deepest feelings, the voice in the poem touched me profoundly. 5/5

Very emotional poem.....good work...

I liked this alot it shows the confusion and frustration!
I kno how you feel but my mom left us for her drugs she cared about it more then her family but i learnt to deal with it.
But i liked it.
5/5

I feel u on this one i went through the same thing
you cant hate r not love that afather afterall he brought u into dis place
that love will never fade