Great poem. It is wounderful. 5/5
one change
4th stanza "Say it to warm sometimes heart"
should sometimes be someones
other then that it is great it has a nice flow and great word choice.

It's awesomee i really enjoyedd it....
definitely deservess a good ratingg. =]]]
good job!

Again, perfect, keep it up. I love your workds...I wanna write like you

Very Good.. not corny at all!!.. Loved it!!.. wonderful job!!.. keep it up!!

Loved it plz rite more

Love poems are more eye catching than sad poems. keep up the good work.