Haha another great poem by you! This is excellent one too. :)
It hurts meh cuz all ur poems r so sad...:P i hope sumhow u can beh happeh again...
5/5
--**Skye~

It sounds like your talking about the moon in a way

very good

and by the way you shood change sense to since

Those words are very moving, well done x

Very nicely written poem. =] you put so much emotions in here, i almost ((feel)) it.
"Gave him all the love I had to give" i really liked that line. something about it stood out to me. 5/5

Again, there are many forced rhymes that make the poem awkward. I feel like there's emotion that you want to express so dearly, but the words are just empty. You're doing a lot of telling instead of showing, and it just makes the poem weird and doesn't leave an impression.

took my smile and riped it apart.
`ripped

I see many smiles throughout the day,
but the one that matters, long ago, went away.
`Favourite lines, by far. It just really stuck out at me .

I feel you can do better. Keep working at it.
--..MiNDYY

Its a very nice written poem!
i loved the way the structure was and all,
you have good potential in writting!
but try to use more rhyming, or more details and straight to the point (if you know what i mean)
but over all, it was really good
keep up the good work

I love it except for the line "he makes me wish I could no longer live" its a bit confusing did he make you feel like this in the relationship or when you guys broke up? everything else is great...good job!

Its excellent,..i really love it,5/5

Aww.. it's so sad, but it's amazing. Cheer up sweetie, and keep on writing.

Awwww, one day you will find the right guy that is going to fix that smile =] I loved the poem it was fantastic !

Waw its so sad and sweet and my boyfrind left me and this how i feel, nice choice of words and nice flow 5/5

Good poem. Many girls out there could relate to this. Almost everyone here is with broken hearts (awww including me, lol.) Beautiful poem, girl. 5/5

I liked it but it was a bit I'm not sure bouncy for my taste.

I didn't feel anything I think was my problem.

Maybe put in some more emotional words would bring this poem to new meanings.

3/5