Damn... that happened 2 me 1 time so i no how u feel. shes all i ever think about nymore. but it'll be ok. it's a very nice poem and i hope to see some poems on the positive side soon. lol. ;)

Hmm well, welcome to the club.

A few things. I know poetry can be fantastic no matter how it is. And i dont feel that one can be bad at it because its how you feel and how you feel is never wrong.

A few tips ( remember i am not saying your work is bad i liked it )

- Try rhyming
- Maybe putting them into stanzas ( easier to read )
- Make your work more orginal ( more you )

Just a few..... thought that might help just perfect your work even more

Ttyl

Colby

O i love this, great job girl, keep itup.
5/5

I liked this one also i liked how u went into detail about what u missed nice job keep it up! 5/5 always
Kate~