Hey sis, i really loved this one
so beautiful words were mixed together well done

Ingrid
What a wonderful picturesque write you've penned here.
A first read this in a club thread and had to come and comment once I saw it posted in your poems.
Well done Huitain Ingrid ....and such a pleasant read.

Ingrid
you did wonderful on this challenge. The imagery and wordchoices are wonderful.
Great Job!
Love cindy

Excellent job on this form Ingrid. The imagery paints a beautiful picture. Good flow and word choice in this piece!

Excellent poem ingrid! you have developed a special talent. well done, keep writing :)

5/5 David

I love your work, simple. The emotion and expressions are just so real. With every poem i read they seem to get better and better.. you have a great talent which you should never doubt. Fantastic job on this form, a brilliant job!!

Nicely done. I've never actually given this style a go before, but it looks like fun. Awesome job. Keep it up!