Comments : Child (Senryu)

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Short piece. Speaks the truth. Good JoB!

    ^_^ 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Nice... only if you have added couple of more stanza........

  • 16 years ago

    by Sad and Alone

    My little daughter do that to me too.. =D so true and so lovely a child can be...

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    So sweet.... in jus few lines u hv described so much... very beautiful..