Comments : Believing In Your Fake Forever...

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Nice poem Nonna:) so i will act like you are not hurting me
    and learn how to believe in your fake forever
    ...These words really touched me inside..keep it up 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Mashallah, That was really beautiful. I loved the rhyme and how much emotion you showed in your writing. 5/5 Keep it up

  • 15 years ago

    by My Name Is Mouse

    Wow, absolutely gorgeous.
    wonderful job. please keep writing.
    xo. Kelsee .xo