Comments : Brief History of Drowning (part 3- The End)

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Another dream.....mmmm....didn't realize it...another story of a boy and a girl...make up your own ending jesse.....you know how it would end.

    You've given me reason
    You've given me rhyme
    Selfishly I asked you
    If you would be mine

    ^ sigh...

    great job...again...darn ur greatness.

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Wow, absolutle beautiful!! just, wow!! u better show her these poems!! 5/5
    xoxo
    ~me~