Comments : Her Pain

  • 16 years ago

    by Hear You Me

    She covers her chest trying to hide the thumping in her blouse.

    i like this line. i originally thought it was about self harm until i got to about half way through. this is so sad but i love the way you have written it, 5/5 well done its really good

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Its so sad :(
    so powerful and strong, i love it. xxx well done on this one hunxx