Comments : God Shall Pay

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    Hmm .. a really sad write .. in the correct category, (*rare to see that these days*)

    i think this one was really a package, (just a few spelling mistakes is all ).. but,
    Still, this was really well written is what

    "..Never walked into the light, Never got to see it's shine.."
    -such a heart breaking line.

    A conversation , the first two lines get you hooked .
    A story, the last two lines , say it all .

    A great write in my opinion.
    :D

    ~Wake~