Comments : Legacy

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Well I started out copying and pasting the lines I felt should have punctuation or should be edited but then there were too many (no that's not bad in this case). Here are a few examples and then you may choose to do what you wish.

    More questions than answers the norm
    Some punctuation of some sort before the norm. If someone says it all at once it doesn't make sense. I'm sure you pause before you say the norm.

    Meek and mild promises contentment
    Do you mean this as in all that are meek and mild PROMISE contentment? If you do then all you need to chance is promises to promise. If you don't then some sort of punctuation to help.

    What does it take to go the distance
    In my poems, even though I rarely do a lot of punctuation, I always use question marks. To me they are essential when one is asking a question.

    The comments:
    Claps* Great work. It kept me on my feet (actually my butt on the couch), and it flowed very nicely. It was a unique poem and it made me happy.

    Five out of five.

  • 16 years ago

    by loviin hym

    I really like your a great writer
    keep the good wrok

  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    This was great, very detailed, some words i dont really know the meaning of!!!! the flow was great....