Comments : To The Judged

  • "They expect us to act and look like they do.
    They treat us as if we are the out cast of the world.
    When really they are the out casts.
    For they have no identities of their own.
    They try and pull us down,"

    That part really go me, I feel the same way everyday at school. Exceptional Poem, could be a little differently arranged, but still very good. 5/5