Comments : The Dirthouse

  • 11 years ago

    by Big hersh

    This is a good write. keep writing and i hope that your colors will soon change

  • 11 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    It's alright to go untouched by the sun
    After all, it might miss me entirely
    And here in the dirt house
    I've come to love my dirty things
    The dirty shapes, the dirty colors--
    So many-- too many at first
    But I'll never get bored

    ^This was my favorite stanza and I love the title, i think you did a really nice job with it and I am glad I stumbled upon it. Keep up the good work, an enjoyable read :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Captivat3d

    Great poem! Keep it up! (: