I liked the poem when it ended at - why it had to snow. I think that part made the poem for me - short and to a point where I could relate. It snowed here in Jamestown New York as well over easter. NIce write!!

This poem was a delight to read. Conjured up images of children running round a large garden with small tree, climbing to find the eggs. It was a treasure. I will read more of your work with anticipation. THankyou for sharing. I have added you as a fave author Mr Darcy X

:) This poem just made me smile, it was like a story with a happy ending. I loved the flow, nice work. Thank you for your comment on my poem.
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A very happy poem!! i like it!!! it almost makes me feel like i'm with the kids searching for the eggs!! lol great

Quite the quick, rapid poem to read.. it flowed beautifully and imagery in this was great. A really neat poem about Easter.. in the middle it gets sad cause they cant find their eggs haha, but in the end it's quite the uplifting happy piece. :]

Well done.. cute little poem.

5/5.