by Baby Rainbow
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Good job in this x |
by Unamed
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Aww.i like it it was really sweet and short..lots of emotion!......great job!!! |
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I think you could have done better on this. it has potential just it doesnt seem like you understood what you were writing. it didnt seem like you put your heart in this poem. you put the title in the title box but it should also be in th epoem just because of the way your poem is set up |
by noha
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Nice write ,ans emotional, i love it and enjoyed too |
by Natalie
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Contantly reminding. |