Aw babe! I really love this poem. I know you really love me! This was very beautiful! Te amo preciosa!! Muah!!

Great piece

A very short write with such BIG words.
Good JoB!

~Baby you complete me,
I'm so in love with you,
I'll be by your side forever,
Until the day that I die~

This is so romantic and so divine!

You wrote it so well.
Keep writing! [5.5]

Best wishes,

Sarahxx

You started off GREAT then you lost your rhyme and the rhythm went with it. You also need to proof after posting as there are punctuation marks missing ie. fifth stanza first line "don't", sixth stanza first line "want" and third line "don't"
Your thoughts are good.
Asalways an opinion.