Hmm beautiful write.. it made me happy in a way lmao, great flow the second stanze was a bit off with the flow but still great, comment back 5/5

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Aww. This was great. You wrote it very well. I'm glad I read this beautiful piece you penned here. 5/5

Oh that's so sweet ! this poem is great and adorable....I love it keep it up 5/5

Aw baby!! I love this poem so much!! No sabes cuanto te amo mi solecita!! Quiero que sepas que eres todo para mi, mi vida! Muah!

Very sweet write, I love the sentiment behind it and I think you did a nice job with the flow as well. I really like the first stanza, it is my favorite. Nice work, you did a good job.