Comments : Wonderclouds

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Yes, I have been always fascinated by clouds. I think clouds are very interesting.. Thinking of clouds makes me missing summer.. Lying on the green grass on the beach...staring at the blue blue skies.. Let the clouds wander free... Awwww

    Thanks for sharing this poem. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    This is really good too! Your writing is fanatastic! It's always subjects that really make you think...and things that I wouldn't ever think to write about! Inspiring then :P
    Only thing is...in the second line, does 'the' really need to be there!? :P
    Good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    I absolutely adore this poem :)