Head up... but i know how you feel if the poem is how you felt, stare out to the stars and watch the amount of space.. and feel like your the only one in it. hmm beautiful poem flow was gentle, hmm comment back see what your thoughts are about mine 5.5

I think a good title would be message for help
this is a really good poem and i can relate to what you are talking about. if you need to talk please come to me. I need someone to talk to too

The stanzas are a bit chopy but all in all i liked the poem a lot. the vocabulary is very strong and you notice the emotion clearly.

i love the ending stanza just very very well written.

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Ooo nice title n_n true, it goes well with 5/5