I love the imagery in this poem, you written it so well. This poem was so heartrending. This is definitely a poem from a poet's heart. Great piece you penned here.

^_^ 5/5 ^_^

I wish I could give you 1,00000000000000
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Keep writing!!

XxSarahXx

Wow Cindy a very thought provoking write you woven here. At first I thought it was about you with this stanza ....

Sun's light extinguished
Laughter heard no more
Black clouds everywhere
Screams cut to the core
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Being alone for the next days without little Johnny and such, because of the "laughter heard no more part"
But then after continuing to read I realized no this is not about you ... because it is much to dark.

Thoughts always wandering
Searching, where to go
Needing a way out
Death it comes to slow
^^^
Wow what an amazing stanza .... one many can relate to in instances I'm sure.

Bright light now dimming
Life has taken it's toll
Spitting evil all around
Devil wins another soul
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This one gave me an eerie feeling and all around goosebumps ... "Devil wins another soul"

This is quite a different write from you my friend .... totally shows no matter the type ... love, sad, funny ... ect ... you master it with your wonderful expressive words and style.

Great write Cindy, you've spun a web of dark poetry here my friend!

Chat tomorrow, Muahhhhhh
Luanne

Tis another great poem cindy, love that ending stanza

Bright light now dimming
Life has taken it's toll
Spitting evil all around
Devil wins another soul

has perfect grammer and the flow is flawless, a 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

That is a beautiful poem done with great emotion. I loved it.

This was a touching piece hun..

"Thoughts always wandering
Searching, where to go
Needing a way out
Death it comes to slow"

These lines were right on the money. Sometimes we can't escape the thoughts of death.. I understand where your coming from with this and hope things begin to shine again for you soon dear.

Cindy,

Such a dark tale...
"The devil wins another soul" He will not win yours, I won't let him!

Love Ingrid

Bright light now dimming
Life has taken it's toll
Spitting evil all around
Devil wins another soul

Now its been so long since i had any poem like this from you. I really liked this one....a bit scary though.. :)

all the best and take care

SO TRUE!

Excellent flow in this piece. Thought provoking. With this stanza:

Thoughts always wandering
Searching, where to go
Needing a way out
Death it comes to slow

You have perfectly portrayed thoughts of depression and pain. A very emotional dark write, that ends with a bang. Good job!

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K33P UP TH3 GOOD WORK!!!!!! :-)

That is a really good poem and produces a very vivid image that is so true and many people understand.

Amazing i loved it! good job 5\5

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So nice worked done by your.... Really I like this..... 5/5

RASHEED

Hi, Poetry evokes human emotions, and this is 1st class, made me teary eyed, love it x P

Imagery is fantastic. Very well thought out. I just love the last line! Wonderful poem.