What a heart reaching read this was.. such pain and sorrow was expressed so clearly through out this piece..

"Waking realizing just a dream
Your gone no longer here
My joy replaced with silent screams
On my pillow a tear
Please come for me take me away
To a place where you'll always stay
Please come for me
Please come for me
Can't live without you one more day"

Loved this stanza in all its sad beauty.. As always a joy to read

Wow this poem is so inspiring and deeply moving! 5/5 i love the way you write, Cindy.

xD Happy Thoughts xD
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

Please come for me
Please come for me
Can't live without you one more day

My sweet Cindy,

I love this beautiful poem, it speaks so clearly of the longing in your heart.
Well done, my sweet girlfriend!

Love Ingrid

I love your word choice in this beautifully penned piece. The flow was excellent and the form was very well done. A write many can relate to.

I love this poem. Great job. I love all the words. It flows very good.

Liked everything abt this beautiful poem.

If love is what you're looking for
It's in this heart of mine

i so very much liked the way you started it and then so smoothly putting the right feeling at the right place for making it such a beautiful poem. Great work dear.

all the best and take care

Good job on the flow and form!!

^If love is what you're looking for
It's in this heart of mine
you are the one I will adore
Until the end of time
I'll wait for you to come to me
When the stars are shining brightly
I'll wait for you
I'll wait for you
I will always be your lady^

Beautifully penned!!!

^Waking realizing just a dream
Your gone no longer here
My joy replaced with silent screams
On my pillow a tear
Please come for me take me away
To a place where you'll always stay
Please come for me
Please come for me
Can't live without you one more day.^

A sad ending. This poem is full of emotion. This last stanza brings a tear to the eye. It is so difficult to lose someone we love. Wonderful job on this piece!!!!