Comments : The Hankercheif.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    This poem is really unusual, I've never read anything about the same sort of subject before. It's really clever the way you write about such harsh emotions by just describing a handkerchief. The line that really stood out to me was:

    "Under the harsh desk lamp light,"

    The alliteration really made it stick in my mind.

    Really well written and full of emotion even though it describes an object. Clever.

    5/5

    Em xXx