I could relate to this one at one point. The emotion was deep and true. The flow was strong through out the poem and it had great word choice. 5/5

Very beautiful poem. One thing I would change though.

"That day when all you said was forever you'll be mine."
- To something like,
'That day you said you'll be forever mine'

It's a long sentence you have, and it ruins the flow of the first verse. Just a suggestion :)

I could relate with the wishing upon stars because I have spent countless hours in my balcony just whispering my deepest secrets to the brightest of stars. There were moments in the poem were ut was too cliche for my taste and I had read that a million times before in other pieces ... I know how easy it is to lose yourself in cliche phrases with love poetry but try not to lose your originality. Well done.

*Thank you for your comment on my poem. I don't understand why the emotion didn't come across to you as the reader but I know that this was one of my most honest pieces. Thanks again though*