Wow, this is really good. This poem everyone actually should start to look up to. This work you penned here shows us to be ourselves and not loose our pride. Great WorKK!! 5.5

This is really a Great poem. Very well written.Keep up this amazing work.
5/5

God bless u

This poem is very well-written. a lot of emotion and truth coming from it. amazing write. great job. i love it.

Looks itz time a save the world... Marvrllous job

Wow very nice
i good theme

This poem is an amazing one.The words contain a lot of emotion.
keep up the gud work..

When your life threatens you and you cannot defend
Just that moment your world comes to an end
That was more than amazing..I did like ur poem so much...U r talented :)..keep it up 5/5

Sourav Its so well written , I liked this poem alot , You know you have a great collection of words and u r a real poet indeed !

When there is a broken heart and no one to mend
That is where your world comes to an end

Lovely
5/5
Cheers
Biya

Wow your pieced are great. I like this one - its the things that make your world come become worse as you go on. Fab.

Kelly
xx