I like your way of writing.. You are truly your own and has an unique and different style. I like difference.. Very good poems :)

Hey,
i like ur poem

Hello, thanks for the comment, you too you have a good poem nice style, it seems bore when i just look your poem coz its too long but when you read it.. it wow... nice..

Andy,

I like the vision with this piece and although predicable, I found it magically wholesome.
You have a real talent in setting a scene or mood, which I personally find captivating. The structure lends itself perfectly to the pending drama and is pleasing to the eye.
My only critique would be this: I feel that you have over-used the word ‘shape’ I am sure a man of your calibre can muster a different verb! ;o)

Well done

Michael

Wow once again amazing
you are a really good poet
keep up the great work

Very good poem
I really loved the imagery in this. Also, the choice of vocabulary and format was perfect
Great Job
5/5

Great job : - )

I like how this poem created a very clear image. well written!

Wow. good imagery. i loved this very much. its so sweet and emotional. goodjob.
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Omg....i think i teared...this poem was that good...its awesome!!!! 5000 outta 5 lol...