Hey all your poems are good... I do not think you need to change anything.

Aww i like the way you used to count stars it was cute and i think all of your poems are really good not much you need to change

I think this one was perfect the way it was. Very cute how you counted the stars.

Hey,
what a cute way to count stars =)
and It rhymes too, loved it
I just wouldn't place it under nature poems but maybe life? but if you look at it in an other way, nature will do fine as well, stars --> nature..)
kisses stephanie

This poem is really good. Good diction and structure as well. Wonderful write! 5.5

The counting was good but the end wasnt so godd

Well hun all of your poems are excellent and this poem is soo cute i love it
5/5
Excellent Job!!!

I enjoyed this cute children's poem so did my daughter